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The man came out and saw him with anger.

Everyone talked lively and happily during the meal, including Kris. Being the best friend of the couple翻譯社 Kris drank a lots in ecstasy because he felt really happy for them.

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When he opened his eyes again, he found himself in the police station. To his dismay, he didn´t remember what he had done yesterday. A policeman came up to him and scolded him angrily. He was too embarrassed to look up at him. He really learned a lesson from the impressing mistake.

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About 30 minutes later, Kris was allowed to leave. He was ashamed for his "trip to the police office." He appologized to the police officer for his irrational behavior, and promised that he wouldn´t do it again.

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	Travel is very nice.It can help us understand everywhere culture, and to meets different people.And travel also can help us to knew everything.	0	文法、句構 （4分） 註：研究人員：劉慶剛（主持人，台北大學）、高照明（台灣大學）、林秀慧（大考中心）、游春琪（大考中間）。 說明：主題清晰。組織完全，重點尚分明。文法句構毛病稍多翻譯但用字、拼字偶有毛病。 One evening, I went to one of my friends´ weeding in my black suit. I was happy that he married a nice girl. And I was so excited that I drank too much. On my way home, my head was dazzling and my feet were heavy that I couldn´t walk well. So I gave up walking home翻譯社 waving my hand to stop a taxi. Though I thought that taxi was strange with the sparking light, I still got into the car and told the driver my address. Then I fell into a deep dream in the taxi. The next morning I woke up, I felt uncomfortable and tried to move my limbs to make myself awake. When I stood up, I found that I was in the police station instead of my bedroom. What happened last night? A policeman pointed at the police car outside and told me "That was the "taxi" you took last night, do you have any problem now?" During the winter vacation this year, I took a trip to Sigapore with my family. This was my first time to go abroad. In those four days翻譯社 I learned a lot about this lively country, including saw the famous Merlion, visited the Indian temple ... etc. When the guide gave some informations for us at some spots, I could merge them in to the geography class easily翻譯社 even could answer the questions from the guide. I was proud of that I could use the knowledge in books to the real life! 4 評分標準： 說明：內容太少，行文不流暢，因文法、用字、拼字錯誤太多，嚴重影響辭意表達。字數不足，另扣一分。 學測編號4：可－14分 申明：略涉及主題，但成長不全。雖測驗考試用起承轉合詞，但因組織雜沓致使文章前後不連貫。因文法、拼字毛病過多，嚴重影響辭意之表達翻譯字數不足，另扣一分。 One evening the man went to attend friend´s marry ceremony翻譯社 he drinks a lot of wine翻譯社 and gulp face to host.The host very angry because he so not polite. 總分 （20分） 內容 （5分） 本題型考試考生應用英文辭彙、句型與語法臉色達意的能力。第一句評量考生利用高中經常使用辭彙（如：global, crisis, created, serious social problems, areas of the world等）及根基句型（含主詞、動詞、受詞、副詞潤色語）的能力翻譯第二句是評量考生利用高中常用詞彙（如：experts, warn翻譯社 take for granted, not any more等）及含有名詞子句之句型的能力。試題之參考謎底及評分標準，請見以下申明 1： 字彙、拼字 （4分） 1.5 1.5 1 1 1 5		編制 （2分） 申明：主題清晰，但部門相關論述成長不全，有些語意表達不甚清晰。有文法毛病，然還沒有影響整體辭意之表達。拼字及用字有誤，影響部分辭意之表達。標點利用稍有欠妥翻譯

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For example, I have gone to the U.S six years ago. I have seen a lot of insterting things in the U.S. The culture is very different from us. The travel not only make me grow a great deal of knowledge but also let me had a good time there. Because of the travel翻譯社 I can really see anything what I have never read from the book. In my opinion, I think travel is the best teacher of me.

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One evening, a man went to a party.He drinked much CH3COOH and that he felt asleep.When the party was end he want to went home.He took taxi and sleep on the car.What can the driver do?When the man opened his eyes翻譯社 he saw aand his family.

After the weding, My brother walked along the street and he wanted to take a taxi. Because my brother war drunk翻譯社 no driver wanted to let him get on the car. Finally, my brother glazed at a car so he raised his hand and got on it. He fell asleep as soon as he sat. When he wake up, he found he was in police station. How terrible he is!

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說明：主題明白，內容論述相當具體且完整翻譯重點分明，組織具聯貫性。詞句富轉變，幾無文法毛病（第二段第二句中a lots，應為a lot。）。辭彙利用妥適，稍有拼字的毛病（例：第四段句中的explaination與最後一段中的appologized皆為錯字。）。

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He didn´t know himself act so funny翻譯社 and wave his hand for police car.The policeman took him to police office.

申明：內容太少，段落發展全無章法。因文法、用字、拼字毛病多，嚴重影響辭意之表達翻譯字數不足，另扣一分。

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Last summer翻譯社 I went to Malaysia with a foundation, I used to consider it to be a poor country, but I was totally shocked at how prosperous it is! So many tall buildings and well-organized communities were right before my eyes! We also had some interaction with the local students. I found their learning attitude very active, which was very different from that of the Taiwanese students.

I have ever gone to Japan once time.I learned many things in the travel.That was my first time to take the plane.I learned what I can do and what I can´t do on the plane.When we got Japan, I found first thing which is different from Taiwan is that their cars and people drive or walk on left.It shocked me because I think that worldwilde.

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說明：1. 依提醒在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文翻譯 　　　 2. 文長120個單詞(words)擺佈。   (1) 本大題總分8分，每小題滿分4分。 (2) 每一個毛病扣0.5分，扣完為止翻譯 (3) 不異之拼字毛病只扣分一次翻譯 (4) 句首未大寫或標點符號不當，各扣0.5分，只扣一次。 第一處 游春琪 樣例 5		We have many travel expiences in our life, like graduate travel, camp on the mountain, visit museams….etc.Every travel have little or much knowledge in it.Even you think that you just play in traveling, in fact, you learn more about life which you can´t learn in common life.		4	字彙、拼字 （4分） Travel is the best teacher, there are three reasons why I consider it. First翻譯社 we can see anything what we have never seen by traveling around the world. Second, we can realize how different the culture is between us. Last but not least, we can learn a lot of knowledge by ourselies which it have never appeared from the book. 內容 （5分） 編制 （2分） 97指考英文考科非選擇題評分標準申明	組織 （5分） 文法、句構 （4分）  指考編號8：劣－4分 The next morning, the man finally awoke, finding himself sitting in the police office. He was shocked. When the police told him the whole thing, he felt so embarrassed. 編制 （2分） 1 字彙、拼字 （4分） 至於各等級之評分樣例，可參閱選才通信第142期「學測與指考英文作文評分樣例」申明（http://www.ceec.edu.tw/CeecMag/articles/142-2.htm），該文以93年學測與指考英文作文為題所作之評分樣例翻譯 樣例   A police car came by and saw him. Paul thought it was a taxi and trying to stop it. The car stopped and Paul past out very soon on the car. Ten minutes later, Paul woke up with a started. He was in the police station. 總分 （20分） 組織 （5分） 內容 （5分） What tain make me the benefit?It is let me learn more and more folklore, and look the different view in this butiful word. When you saw the romantic EiffelTower in the movies, or watched the Great Wall of China on TV, have you ever imagined that you could admire such specific constructions on the sense some day? The advantages of traveling is a lot. First, traveling can make us open our eyes, we can see the senery not through the media翻譯社 but by ourselves. How wonderful that you can appreciate breathtaking senses just in front of them! Second, with the advanced education, we have known a wide variety of knowledges about many countries. Such as history, climate and even customs, but if we never been the places, it is no use to get so many informations. 組織 （5分） 文法、句構 （4分） 組織 （5分） 編制 （2分） 總分 （20分） "What the hell do you thing you´re doing here?!" the man cried out. He quickly threw Paul out and trying to fix the mass Paul made. 3.5 3.5 2.5 2.5 1 13 總分 （20分） 說明：有主題，但部門相幹論述成長不全。有結構，但未聯貫成長。文法、拼字、用字有很多錯誤，且影響部門辭意表達翻譯 文法、句構 （4分） 總分 （20分） 　　Travel can see a lot of country and study different educated.Some country have historic site, some country have the religion, and some country have the technology etc. 編制 （2分） 體例 （2分） One evening, my brother dressed himself up in order to attend his friend´s weding. When he arrived at the resturant, he came across a classmate who hadn´t connected with him since he graduated from college. My brother was so happy that he drank a large amount of wine. 文法、句構 （4分） 學測編號7：差－6分 文法、句構 （4分） 總分 （20分） 4.5 4 3.5 3.5 1.5 17 1 4 總分 （20分） 申明：主題之論述完全，辭意清晰。組織上前後聯貫，轉承語使用大致適合；句型雖有轉變，文法毛病少，但仍有效法與拼字毛病翻譯標點符號亦稍有欠妥。  學測編號9：劣－2分 總分 （20分） 編制 （2分） Kris couldn´t remember anything that had happened during the drive to the police office.He was waken up by a thunderous sound翻譯社 "What are you doing? Do you know where it is?" said the police officer. Kris was shocked to death but had no reason for explaination. 指考編號4：可－11分 申明：內容與圖意不甚符合，相幹論述成長不全，部門語意不清晰。組織不敷連貫，最後一段偏離主題，與前文所敘述內容不符翻譯文法及拼字毛病，影響部門文意之表達；標點使用稍有欠妥。 文法、句構 （4分） Travel Is The Best Teacher 文法、句構 （4分） 指考英文作文評分樣例 I have a travel in East Taiwan翻譯社 there have high mountain and good view that use me think about environment and recycle.If we haven´t recycle garbage, we would destroy that good view in East Taiwan. When it got darker and darker outside翻譯社 he knew that he had to go home. So much did he drank that he couldn´t even drive home on his own. He then walked on the side of the road and tried to find a taxi to take him home. He waved to the cars, shouted out something, and even ran onto the road with his body turning round. Not long after he did these翻譯社 here came a car. It stopped in front of him翻譯社 and he got on the car without hesitation. And soon, he fell asleep. 0.5 0.5 1 3 體例 （2分） 採整體式評分，分為五等級：特優（19-20分）、優（15-18分）、可（10-14分）、差（5-9分）、劣（0-4分），閱卷委員於浏覽完考生試卷後，於腦海裡產生一個分數，再以各分項評分標準（表一）檢閱是否契合整體印象分數。另外，字數明明不足，扣1分翻譯未分段，扣1分；寫多段，不扣分翻譯 申明：內容雖說起與主題相關之事物，但未能就主題充分闡揚。重點成長不全，第二段結尾不明顯翻譯文法、用字、拼字錯誤多，較著影響文意之表達。 組織 （5分） Paul was already drunk. He didn´t know what was he doing, and even where he was. 3.5 3 1.5 16 As a result, the man wake up look the policeman翻譯社 the policeman very angry said, "Were are you".Do you know?Then man said, I don´t know." "Why I am here?" If I hadn´t been to Malaysia, I wouldn´t have gained so many insights in these things. To me, travel is truly the best teacher. 指考編號5：差－8分		內容 （5分）	文法、句構 （4分）   組織 （5分） 學測編號1：特優－19分 字彙、拼字 （4分） 申明：主題清晰、具體，內容富厚；重點分明、組織完全且連貫。詞句佈局轉變豐碩，幾無文法錯誤（稍有時態不一致的毛病，例第二對的第一句Last summer...foundation後的逗號應為句號。）；用字得宜（但第一段第三句中的broaden my mind應為broaden my horizons）。 字彙、拼字 （4分） 0.5	0.5	0.5	0.5	1	2

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In my virgin tain.This is the summer vecation in the Japen翻譯社 Japen are very confrotable, In the every where, You are improstable to find any grabeby.

In fact.I wish go to Japen again翻譯社 If I can go to Japen in the November to see the rain, I just keep butiful mood in the

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申明：略提主題，但完全沒有成長，幾無內容可言。文章太短僅二句，無法判定英文作文的能力翻譯字數不足，另扣一分翻譯

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